Section 1
Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers
Definition
A word that seems to modify the wrong word in the sentence is called a misplaced modifier. A dangling modifier does not clearly modify any word or word group in the sentence.
Explanation
Think of modifiers as descriptive words that need a buddy! They should stick close to the word they're describing. If a modifier is too far away, your sentence can sound silly or confusing. A misplaced modifier is like putting a hat on your foot. A dangling modifier is like a floating hat with no person to wear it! Always check that your descriptions are right next to the words they describe.
Examples
- MISPLACED: Leo only ate one of the five cookies in the jar. [This sounds like eating was the only thing Leo did with the cookies.]
- CORRECT: Leo ate only one of the five cookies in the jar. [Here, only correctly modifies one, meaning he didn't eat two or three.]
- DANGLING: Looking at the sky, the stars were shining brightly. [Looking at the sky doesn't clearly modify any word. The stars weren't looking!]
- CORRECT: Looking at the sky, Maria saw the stars shining brightly. [Now we know Maria was the one looking.]