Section 1
Weak Pronoun Reference
Definition
Avoid a weak reference, which occurs when a pronoun refers to an antecedent that has been suggested but not expressed.
Explanation
Think of a weak reference as a pronoun pointing to a ghost! The word it's referring to, its antecedent, is hinted at but isn't actually written down. To fix this, you must either replace the vague pronoun with a specific noun or rewrite the sentence to include the missing antecedent. Don't leave your reader guessing what you mean!
Examples
- WEAK: My brother is fascinated by pilots, and he hopes to become one someday. [The antecedent of one is not stated.]
- CLEAR: My brother is fascinated by pilots, and he hopes to become a pilot someday. [The vague pronoun one is replaced with the specific noun pilot.]