Section 1
Ambiguous Pronoun Reference
Definition
Avoid an ambiguous reference, which occurs when any one of two or more words could be a pronoun’s antecedent.
Explanation
An ambiguous reference creates confusion because a pronoun like he, she, or it could point to more than one person or thing in the sentence. The reader is left guessing! Your goal is to make the pronoun's connection to its antecedent crystal clear. You can often fix this by rearranging the sentence or replacing the unclear pronoun with the specific noun it should refer to.
Examples
- AMBIGUOUS: When Lily spoke to her mom, she was worried. [Who was worried? Lily or her mom?]
- CLEAR: Lily was worried when she spoke to her mom. [Here, she clearly refers to Lily.]
- AMBIGUOUS: After the bike hit the fence, it was damaged. [What was damaged? The bike or the fence?]
- CLEAR: The bike was damaged after it hit the fence.